I'm not sure if its just the direction that you're going for, but this one and a few others are being contained by line a bit too much. Like the lines around the bridge of his nose; you could have done without the line on the light side. Just a thought
Thanks for all the comments Pat, I'm trying to find a happy medium between line and value. The lines in this one in my opinion aren't too spectacular. Thanks for catching that. This one was more of a sketch than any other the others, super quick and the lines you see were added in a sketchy manner before value was added. I've been trying to move away from that. As I move into color I think I will be abandoning line even more... I'm experimenting with this quick medium, and trying to take my work somewhere is hasn't gone before. And posting one a day is helping out LOTS! Once again, thanks for the crits, always very appreciated.
Cool! I'm really impressed by the sheer volume of work you've been doing btwy! It's inspiring.
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